Stanford's "What Matters To Me"...Is this too risky of an approach?

College Essays
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<p>If you're interested, can I PM you my response to Stanford's "What matters to you, and why" essay? I feel like I took a risky approach and some people were criticizing me for it...can you give me your opinions if my style worked/answered the prompt or was too wordy and confusing? Thanks!!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a read of it.</p>

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<p>PMing it over! Thanks so much (:</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look too if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you some feedback if you want!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you have time to send it to me(:</p>

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<p>Me too! I will be glad to read it!</p>

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<p>I’d love to help you make revisions to your Stanford supplements.</p>

<p>As an international applying to top US universities, I chose the risky route for many of my essays and I guessed it worked out. I will be joining the Stanford Class of 2016 in the fall :)</p>