Statement of Purpose - Foreigner needs backup!

<p>Hi there.</p>

<p>Im a history major from germany (2nd year) applying for a study abroad program in the US.
One of the requirements is a statement of purpose. </p>

<p>Since Im not a native speaker additional comments on style, tone, spelling, etc.
would be extremeley helpful.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>anyone willing to read?</p>

<p>it's about film, liberal arts, past experiences in the US and Walt Whitman!</p>

<p>I sent you a PM.</p>