<p>No one's going to rip off your Harry Potter poem ^_^.</p>
<p>House Elf
by Lockz</p>
<p>House elf named Dobby
Dumb as a brownie
Screwed over Harry
Ugly and scrawny</p>
<p>BTW, It isn't suppose to rhyme.</p>
<p>Roses are red</p>
<p>violets are blue</p>
<p>Most poems rhyme</p>
<p>but this one doesn't. :D</p>
<p>lame, I've heard that before.</p>
<p>I just thought about Snape's pitiful ending and decided to write a poem. Its one of my worst yet and I expect acerbic comments but do include constructive criticism. I know I've repeated a lot of words and used a retarded rhyme scheme but even then just read and tell me what you think.
Now for the poem:</p>
<p>As I lay dying here
Remember memories long ago
Oh! how cruelly so
you were snatched from me
Seventeen years hence
I still love thee</p>
<p>Your green eyes glinted
with nothing but hate (for me)
since the moment I offended thee
Not a chance to kneel and apologize
just cold emptiness and averted eyes</p>
<p>Only you could turn me
from the path I took
instead you left me alone
and my life you shook
Hating others but still loving you
I became the man I shouldn't have (been)</p>
<p>I return to the soil from whence I came
As the poison courses through my veins
Happier times come to mind
As you swing into the sky
Your doe looks over me
as I say, wherever you are
In life, In death
I will always love you.</p>
<p>Alternate three lines for the ending.
Say whate'er you will
In death, as life
I love you still.</p>
<p>awww, the last two lines are so sweet</p>
<p>i really liked that poem mcq</p>
<p>please tell me its not classified as emo.</p>
<p>maybe just a little, lol. But not really. :D</p>
<p>what do you think of my poem?</p>
<p>me? or other people in general? lol.</p>
<p>everyone who has read it.</p>
<p>it's real and it's spectacular</p>
<p>and very meaningful, lol.</p>
<p>thanks....</p>