Supplement essays -- feedback?

<p>Anyone willing to read my Brown supplement essays? </p>

<p>I’ve read through them several time for grammar, and I think they’re alright in that respect, but I was hoping for some feedback specifically on content, clarity, and flow… so if anyone is good at that, your help would be appreciated.</p>

<p>I'll help. PM me.</p>

<p>I'll help dude. PM it to me.</p>

<p>I'll give it a read. PM me.</p>

<p>i can give you review..</p>

<p>pm me if u want.</p>

<p>i sent all my applications about a week ago..</p>

<p>I'll read it too, if you so desire.</p>