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College Essays
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<p>Hi I have an essay that's quite different than what everyone told me to write about. It's more from the heart I think but I think it's really risky and needs editing. I wanna make sure that it makes sense to other people and that it isn't just a bunch of words and that it says something about myself. Tell me if it gets the reader to know me a little.
thanks.
Im applying to NYU, loyola, northwestern, emory, u of I, and u of Chicago. </p>

<p>tell me if you want me to PM it to you</p>

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<p>I’d evaluate it with my honest opinion.</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>email it to me…ill read it for u</p>

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<p>If you can handle constructive criticism, PM me!</p>