<p>So let's have a discussion about this;</p>
<p>Reading some books from admission officers of Ivy League's, they say they like those application essays which are in a sense abstract. Famous examples include things like the girl who tried to pick up a fish ball. They in a sense, are just telling a story through the applicant's eyes.</p>
<p>However, having watched the MIT webcast, Matt on the other hand talks about how some of the best essays he's read are not the one's which are abstract but straight up tell the story of one's life. Where they are from, what they've done, etc - he even said that some others may think this to be boring, but those are the ones which stand out to him.</p>
<p>So my question is; which do we want? Do we want both? The first type primarily shows the way in which we think, the second shows our background and history. Can we somehow join them in a culmination? Should we write abstractly or directly? Does it differ by school?</p>
<p>What do you think?</p>
<p>Upfront and directly. Leave the abstract to the artists.</p>
<p>I am applying this time. My common app essay is a mix of everything you described. and yes it is very boring.</p>
<p>Essay should not only be about you, but also should be “you”, in a sense. If, for example, you are like my friend, who is funny and awesome, you can make an incident about his hairstyle great. If you more introspective, your essay style should show that, not only the content. I think colleges scrutinize the voice more than we think they do…</p>
<p>Well, my answer was not very clear…but then again, what do I know?</p>
<p>The thing is, not every applicant has a life story that’s so interesting that they can write a straightforward essay that’s still captivating and amazing. Like, if a student from a war-torn country helped save dozens of lives after escaping death and watching his family die, of course he/she can write an amazing essay without being abstract or creative. On the other hand, if a kid has millionaire parents and just studies/parties all day, he/she will probably have to resort to something else to make the essay interesting. Personally I like using abstract concepts and ideas to show who you are.</p>
<p>I go with the abstract. Picture the poor readers reading essay after essay that’s self seriously telling you a life story. Not too any 18 year old kids have fascinating life stories! So anything that breaks the tedium with humor and fun is much appreciated. Now if you can tell a humorous rendition of your life story, that would also work.</p>