<p>I'm willing to trade my UC essay with someone to critique! Msg me if you're interested!!</p>
<p>what is uc????????</p>
<p>bump???????</p>
<p>it's University of California(s) (berkeley, los angeles, san diego, irvine, etc.)</p>
<p>stressed0ut - Let's trade! I only have my "big" essay so far, so if you don't mind, we can trade that. Just PM your essay to me and then I'll PM mine to you! :)</p>
<p>I'm down. I've done all 3 of my essays and I am just proof reading them and stuff. If you wanna trade so we can both improve our essays I'd love that. Just PM me.</p>
<p>oh i forgot to say, PM me:) im done with my 600 one and i'm revising my 200 ones!</p>
<p>stressed out: I Pm'd you a message.</p>
<p>i'll trade with you.. i've only written my 200 word one for the academic preparation one .. pm me</p>
<p>I have written 3 essays</p>
<p>prompt 1 academic endeavors: I wrote about how I flew across the country last summer to take a course at UCLA to tryout the UC system.. and how that has influenced me</p>
<p>Prompt 2 contribution: I'm written 2 essays, debating which one to use.</p>
<p>1) my dad's alcoholism in 10th grade, how that affected my views on a lot of things (while explaining my not-so-good 10th grade grades)</p>
<p>or</p>
<p>2) my hobby of growing giant pumpkins, how that gave me a sense of belonging to a part of community</p>
<p>prompt #3: I work 4 jobs simultaneously.. how that's contributed to my educational experience</p>