<p>[ size=+2][ color=green][ b]Decision: Accepted, with Presidential Scholarship**[/color][/size]</p>
<p>[ b]Objective:**[ list]
Class Rank: School doesn’t provide rankings, but I am likely in the top 2% at a highly competitive public magnet school</p>
<p>GPA: 4.0 unweighted, 4.9/5 weighted</p>
<p>SAT I: 2340 (800 CR, 800 W, 740 M)</p>
<p>SAT II: 770 Physics, 760 Math II</p>
<p>APs: U.S. Gov’t & Politics - 5 (I only have one because I changed schools junior year and my new school doesn’t offer them)</p>
<p>Senior Courses: All senior courses are taken at Worcester Polytechnic Institute (so college level/higher than AP level)
-Intro to Biotechnology
-Object Oriented Design Concepts (Computer Science)
-Physics: Mechanics
-Physics: Electricity & Magnetism
-American Dream Literature (Junior/Senior level college course)
-Literature of Sin (Junior/Senior level college course)
-Intro to Philosophy and Religion
-Introductory Ethics (Junior/Senior level college course)
-Calculus I-IV (Essentially calc BC plus multi-variable)</p>
<p>Major Awards: 1st place MA State Science Fair, US Air Force Award for Research, National Merit Scholar Finalist, 3rd Place in International Essay Competition
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<p>[ b]Subjective:**[ list]</p>
<p>ECs: -Mock Trial (team captain)
-Speech & Debate (Club president)
-President of my class
-Intern at US Congressman’s Office
-Tutor at Inner City School
-National Honor Society
-Teen Leadership & Service Program in Vietnam
-Various Leadership and Government programs
-Peer Mentor
-~600 hours of community service
-Leadership training program and Counselor at Summer Camp</p>
<p>I have 5 published papers, and have completed 2 large-scale research projects (one in biology and one in engineering)
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<p>[ b]Writing (Write a brief description and Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):**[ list]
Essay; Wrote about one of my campers telling me he was suicidal and how it gave me perspective on what it means to be an adult. 9.5/10
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<p>[ b]Other**[ list]
Teacher Recs: Haven’t seen either bu they were probably glowing, 10/10
Counselor Rec: I know her reasonably well and the recommendation was probably very good. 9/10</p>
<p>Ethnicity: White, non-hispanic
Income Bracket: Upper Middle Class
Gender: Male
State: MA
No “Hooks”
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<p>[ b]Reflection:**[ list]
Strengths: College coursework, writing, research experience/publications, leadership positions
Weaknesses: I hadn’t shown much interest in the school before applying
Other admissions decisions: Accepted to Middlebury College, accepted to the University of Virginia, accepted to The College of William and Mary as a Monroe Scholar, accepted to UMass Amherst Honors w/ $13,000 per year, accepted to Wheaton College w/ $20,000 per year, accepted to WPI w/ $40,000 per year</p>

) if it was then i did submit one. best friend. known for 10 years. talked about my passion and dedication for academics and other areas and explained my weaknesses as prioritizing my peers XD he wrote this without me asking for it. and included that in the rec. 9/10 probably.
good luck with waitlist/colleges that haven’t gotten back to you yet! sincerely wish you all the best. and fellow asian students: I know the “Asian expectations” which are not far from the stereotypes. they can be brutal at times. hope nobody gives you guys a hard time about college decisions! good luck! *</p>