Trying to get into Rutgers-New Brunswick..is there anybody willing to read my essay?

<p>My grandfather attended Rutgers University, and it is now my top choice amongst my schools. Is there anybody who'd like to help by reading my essay? I'm really not sure what to add to it, and although most say not to let a ton of people read it, I'm a writer and a perfectionist, so..if you're willing please, lend a hand and I will return the favor :)</p>