UC prompt 1 and 2. Please critique

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read my personal statements and critique them?
I would greatly appreciate it.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I’ll critique yours.</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll help FOR FREE!</p>

<p>I’m willing to critique it.</p>

<p>here, i’ll help. pm me</p>