Decision: Accepted to Eleanor Roosevelt College for Public Health
Objective:[ul]
[] SAT I (breakdown): 2240 (720M, 720CR, 800W)
[] SAT II: 720 Math II, 640 Bio E, 690 Bio M
[] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.66
[] Weighted GPA: 3.98
[] UC GPA: 4.05
[] Rank/percentile: 15% (55/471)
[] AP (place score in parenthesis): 3 World History, 3 Biology
[] Senior Year Course Load: AP Spanish Language, AP Calculus AB, AP Government, AP Economics, ASB Leadership, AP English Literature, Intro to Psychology (local community college, 1st Semester), Intro to Organic Chemistry (local community college, 2nd Semester)
[li] Awards: My city’s “Teen of the Year” 2014, Chemistry Award, Homecoming Royalty (lol), Leadership Award.[/li]
[/ul]Subjective:[ul]
[] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): ASB Leadership (Student Body President), Earth Club (Founder and Co-President), Peer Tutoring Program (President), Tobacco Use Prevention Education (Program Leader and Peer Educator in 11th and 12th), my calculus class (teacher literally stays until 10PM), Link Crew (commissioner), Medical Club (President).
[] Job/Work Experience: Hospital Intern, Tae Kwon Do Instructor, Abercrombie and Fitch cashier/floor model.
[] Volunteer/Community service: Volunteer at a local library in a more underprivileged neighborhood,
[] Summer Activities: Intern at a Hospital in Nepal, traveled to villages around Nepal to teach English and tobacco use prevention to schoolchildren in villages.
[li] Essays: I had worked on one since August (your world), and the other one was shorter and written hastily the night before he app was due.[/li]
[/ul]Other[ul]
[] Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
[] Intended Major: Biochemistry/Public Health
[] State: California
[] School Type: Large suburban public, fairly competitive
[] Ethnicity: South Asian
[] Gender: Male
[li] Hooks: None really. I guess being Nepali means I’m a minority.[/li]
[/ul]Reflection[list]
[] Strengths: triumphs, experiences, leadership, and sat scores.
[] Weaknesses: GPA and Class Rank
[] Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I suppose my grades were not the best, but when put into context with the obstacles I’ve faced through high school, they take on a different light.
[] Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected:
Accepted - UC Riverside, UC Irvine (CHP), UC Davis, UC San Diego
Waitlisted - University of Chicago
Waiting - UC Berkeley, UCLA, UCSB, UCSC, Brown University, Claremont McKenna College, Columbia University, Harvard College, Pitzer College, Stanford University, Tufts University