<p>Hey all! I've been writing my statements of intent for transferring to UF for the past few days, trying to perfect them the best I can. I'm going to be applying for transfer with a 3.0 GPA but with an immensely strong upward trend. The reason for the early poor performance is related to my father's sudden death; it is exceedingly important that I convey that in my application, as my numbers may not be strong enough standing alone.</p>
<p>These statements have to be as close to perfect as possible, so I would appreciate it if a few seasoned critics could comment on them! Let me know and I'll PM them to you; they have a 1000 character limit so it shouldn't take too long. Thank you so much in advance!</p>