<p>I have an idea for a writing supplement but I am concerned it is too unusual. The prompt is centered around why I have chosen to apply to this college and how I would fit in there. I have an analogy, but I am concerned that it is too strange and that it will look like I am not fully elaborating.</p>
<p>i think you don’t want to go so far afield in your “Why X” essay that they can’t really follow you there OR learn something about why the college is the right fit for YOU. My kids were pretty straightforward in their “Why X” essays, and had great admissions results. They listed programs they were interested in, past experiences they had that fit well with something available at the college, specific things they had noticed on their visits, etc. The admissions committee that asks “Why X” isn’t looking for something too “cute”. They want to gauge your sincere interest in and knowledge of the college. </p>
<p>^^ I agree with intparent. Straightforward, honest answers are always best. Colleges ask the “Why me” question for two reasons: (1) Admissions wants to see that you have done your due diligence on their school and are serious about attending if admitted. No college wants to be your back up school, so they are looking for specific reasons why you want to attend, responses such as: “I want to attend ‘X’ college because of their renowned ____ department” or “I would really like to study with Professor W, as her research in the field of _______ is one of my main interests” and (2) Admissions wants to understand you a little better to see if their school would be a good fit for you. Answering the question with an analogy may make Admissions question your overall seriousness about their school and put you in the waitlist pile.</p>
<p>Thank you both so much for your helpful answers!</p>