UW Madison Essay #2

Hey guys! I’m planning to transfer to UW Madison this fall 2015 and was wondering if anyone out there could go through my essay to the prompt:

Tell us why you decided to apply to the University of Wisconsin-Madison. In addition, share with us the academic, extracurricular, or research opportunities you would take advantage of as a student. If applicable, provide details of any circumstance that could have had an impact on your academic performance and/or extracurricular involvement

Any help would be greatly appreciated! :slight_smile:

lets see it…