UW short essay. HELP PLEASE :]

<p>can someone please go over and correct my UW short essay</p>

<p>much thanks in advance</p>

<p>i will, if you want. but just to warn you, i am applying to UW this year. but i won't steal your essays. pm me if you are comfortable with it.</p>

<p>same here..i'm willing to read</p>

<p>i submitted last night. w00t</p>

<p>I'm willing to read. I already got in, so it's no big deal. Lol. PM it this way.</p>