Weird Writing Question from Blue Book?

<p>Which one is correct and why is the other one wrong?</p>

<p>Q. Bats and mosquitoes come out at twilight, (and the bats would look for mosquitoes and the mosquitoes would look) for people.</p>

<p>Answer 1: and the bats come to look for mosquitoes while the mosquitoes look
Answer 2: the bats to look for mosquitoes and the mosquitoes to look</p>

<p>Is it sentence parallelism?</p>

<p>“Answer 2” is correct because the “to look” phrase is consistent.
“Answer 1”'s verb form shifts from “come to look” to “look.”</p>

<p>(Taken from Collegeboard’s online answer explanation.)</p>

<p>(Taken from Collegeboard’s online answer explanation.) </p>

<p>How’d you find the section and question number so fast?</p>

<p>Thanks for the help.</p>

<p>Oh and for future references, if you copy and paste the question into a search engine, you can find explanations from cc. Doing this gives you different and correct information too! :)</p>

<p>This link came up, and it provides more information:</p>

<p><a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/1397608-grammar-question-about-parallelism.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/1397608-grammar-question-about-parallelism.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>The use of the conjunction “and” in the first choice is imprecise. So even if you were to fix the parallelism error as by writing:</p>

<p>Bats and mosquitoes come out at twilight, and the bats come to look for mosquitoes while the mosquitoes come to look for people.</p>

<p>the sentence would still be poorly written.</p>

<p>[By the way, why do you view the question as “weird”?]</p>