Hi! I’m new to college confidential, but I wish I had discovered it sooner. I am a high school senior who has applied regular decision to ten colleges, some of which include Harvard, Princeton, Yale, Stanford, Johns Hopkins, and UCLA. I would love if you would leave responses about my resume, where I could have strengthened myself, and what I might expect when the decisions roll out in the coming months. Thanks for the feedback! Just trying to find ways to make the time until March fly by…
PROFILE:
White, upper-middle income, Non-Legacy, Male, Public School
STATS:
Cumulative W GPA: 4.68 (Rank 4 of 600)
Cumulative UW GPA: 4.00 (Rank 1 of 600)
ACT: 35 (Essay: 12)
SAT: 1540 (Essay: 22)
Math II: 800
M. Biology: 770
AP’s:
Biology (5)
Euro (5)
APUSH (5)
Lang (5)
Envi Sci (5)
Currently enrolled in Calc BC, Literature, and Gov.
EC’s:
Student Government (9th-12th)
- Executive Vice President
- Spirit/Activities Department Advisor
- Student Section Spirit Leader
- Co-Founded “Student Senate”
- Initiated Intramural tournament series
Boy Scouts (2010-Present)
- Eagle Scout (project: built a sensory garden for special needs students at a local elementary school. Raised $1900, 300 service hours, media)
- Senior Patrol Leader (11th-12th)
Cross Country (9th-12th)
- Varsity Team Captain
- 2nd Place league JV (11th)
Track and Field (9th-12th)
- Varsity Team Captain
- All League Frosh/Soph 800m (10th)
American Legion Involvement
- Boys State California Delegate (Served as State Assembly Minority Leader, placed 2nd of 1000 in oratorical competition, legal advocacy quarterfinalist, impeached governor, and garnered 300 signatures for my petition to change structure of convention)
- AL Oratorical Competition (2019: Post, District Champion & Area Runner-Up // 2020: Post Champion, future rounds TBD)
Religious Affiliation
- Extensive involvement with local congregation & service
- Youth Group President
Model United Nations (9th-12th)
- Club President (12th)
Not One More Teen Suicide Club (10th-12th)
- Club Treasurer (11th)
Ping Pong Club (9th-11th)
- Club Secretary (10th-11th)
So, what do you think? I know the competition is really steep, so feel free to be honest. At the end of the day, I’ll be happy wherever I end up.
Thanks again, I look forward to constructive criticism.