Hi, I’m an International Student from Australia applying to the Ivy’s. I’m a pretty different applicant, so figuring out how I rank might be hard, but please give me your honest, non-sugarcoated opinion!
I am currently on a gap year, after graduating last year. [Aussie school year is from Feb to November].
From your experience/what you think, could you please tell me how good my chances of getting in are. My top choice is Princeton.
INFO:
Ethnicity: Indian Australian, Great Great Grandmother was Maori
Citizenship: Australian
Sex: Female
Major: Going for environmental studies, but unsure right now
School: Private school of approx. 80 students per year level
Course Load: Pretty rigorous, hard to judge as all schools in Victoria [state I am from] offer similar subjects and some bigger schools offer IB [mine didn’t]
Grading System: A+ = 90%-100%, A=80%-89%, B=70%-79% C=60-69% D=50-59% E=40-49%
No GPA, Rank or AP’s.
GRADES:
Most of my grades during high school were A’s, with some B’s, but there are a few lower grades I should point out
BUT please don’t just read this and ignore the rest, there are reasons for these grades, I am not a bad student!
Year 9:
- C+ in Sport Science
Year 10:
- C+ in English
- C and C+ in Math
- C in Religion
Year 11:
- D in Chemistry
- D+ in English
- 2 C’s in Math
- E and C in Physics
Year 12:
- C in Math
- C in Uni Bio
SCORES:
October 05: M - 770 ; WR- 760; Total: 1530
SAT IIs: Chem 760 ; Bio [M] 790 ; Bio[E] - 740 ;
Math II and Physics- November 1st [To redeem my poor grades at School]
EXTRA-CURRICULARS:
Plastic Recycling Business- (gap year)
30 Hours per week; 52 Weeks per year
Founded and running Trident, a plastic recycling business.
Science Competitions - (9th - 10th)
15 Hours per week; 30 Weeks per year
Won a major bursary Science Talent Search Victoria in Year 9 and was a runner up in the BHP Billiton Science and Engineering Awards in Year 10.
Science Research- (9th - 12th except year 10)
10 Hours per week; 30 Weeks per year
Every year in high school except year 10, I conducted different research projects.
Student Representative Council- (10th - 12th)
15 Hours per week; 35 Weeks per year
I helped the council in year 10, was the representative in and 11, and the chair in year 12.
Science Forums (10th - 12th)
168 Hours per week; 4 Weeks per year
Year 9 - Oxbridge Summer Seminar, Year 11 - National Youth Science Forum, Year 12 - London International Youth Science Forum
Kayaking (9th - gap year)
3 Hours per week; 52 Weeks per year
Kayak to maintain fitness, collect plastic from bodies of water and training to kayak around Tasmania for the environment
Wellbeing Council- (11th - 12th)
2 Hours per week; 30 Weeks per year
SRC partnered with the Wellbeing council, and I was part of wellbeing council, since it was started in year 11.
Work (10th - gap year)
15 Hours per week; 40 Weeks per year
From year 10 to June 2019, I was a netball umpire, working 3 hours a week. From year 11 to the end of year 12, I worked at McDonalds as Part of the Kitchen crew. During 2019 I have been a swim coach, babysitter and started CEO of my business.
Hiking + Camping - (7th - gap year)
7 Hours per week; 20 Weeks per year
Throughout the year, I go on hikes and sometimes camp in different locations around Victoria.
Social Justice Trips- (10th - 11th)
168 Hours per week; 4 Weeks per year
In year 10, I travelled to Cambodia with my school to visit our partner, The Green Gecko Foundation. In year 11 I travelled to Peru for my Duke of Edinburgh Gold Award Residential Project, and conducted reforestation.
Debating- (10th - 11th)
7 Hours per week; 25 Weeks per year
In year 10 and 11 I participated in the DAV competition and in year 11 I was my house debating captain.
Girls Sport Victoria - (7th - 12th)
4 Hours per week; 30 Weeks per year
Participated in four sports every year, according to the GSV schedule. Won several coaches awards and MVP’s throughout.
Tennis - (2nd - 10th)
7 Hours per week; 40 Weeks per year
Played with WDTA for 9 years and with school for 6 years.
Saturday Netball - (4th - 12th excluding 6 and 7)
4 Hours per week; 30 Weeks per year
WDNA for 4 years, BNA for 3 years
Sports Camps- (9th - 12th)
168 Hours per week; 10 Weeks per year
Participated in yearly school camps, snowsports camps, duke of edinburgh camps and fitness camps.
Viola - (5th - 10th)
4 Hours per week; 40 Weeks per year
I changed from violin to viola in the 5th grade and played it until year 10.
LEADERSHIP:
Student Representative Council in Year 11
Student Rep Council Chair year 12
Debating Captain Year 11
Form Captain Year 9
Multiple Sport Team Captains
Honours:
Work Experience:
Umpired Netball for four years [2016-2019], McDonalds for all of 2018, babysitting for all of 2019, CEO of my own plastic recycling business [TRIDENT]
Volunteering:
Coached school netball and other sport teams
Cared for infants at my schools daycare
Trained as a First Aid worker at a non-profit
applying for an internship at wolf reserve in Indiana starting early 2020
Did reforestation in Peru
Taught kids english, helped with farming in Cambodia
EXTENUATING CIRCUMSTANCES!!!
I am a victim of long term domestic violence, which escalated in year 10, with an incident at the end of year 11, leading me to be sent to live with my uncle. My mum has been suicidal since year 9. My family has a lot of undiagnosed mental health issues due to the ‘taboo’ in Indian culture. My twin sister has depression and it is suspected that my dad has Autism.
I was stalked in Year 9 after school. The man followed me before indecently exposing himself. I managed to get away. I was diagnosed with PTSD.
During year 11, my sister told me that our dad had told her that I may have autism. A counsellor had suggested it in Year 5, but my dad got mad and ripped up the report. I was finally diagnosed at the end of Year 11.
For a long time I pushed down feelings about all these issues for a long time, until I became so depressed I had to be hospitalised for two weeks during Year 12, due to an intentional overdose. I was diagnosed with Depression, Anxiety and PTSD. Thanks due to my amazing psychologist, I now only have anxiety.
I started my own plastic recycling business at the start of this year [I am on a gap year] due to the horrible pollution problem. It has been successful so far. A website is underway [www.tr1dent.com.au]. I am also training to kayak solo around Tasmania [the island beneath Australia] to raise awareness about the plastic pollution problem.
I will not need [or need very little] financial aid.
As you can tell, my application may be a bit hard to judge as it is quite different from a typical U.S high schoolers. It would be so awesome if I got into an Ivy league or any good U.S uni, as I really want a fresh start. I really love the Princeton, it is so cute and the campus is so beautiful [and only 80 minutes from New York!]. Also I have family living there. If I don’t get in, it won’t be the end of the world, but would be so cool if I did:)