What is important to you? And why? (maximum 250 words)

University of British Columbia’s essay

I couldn’t think of an appropriate response so I tried to answer it with something unusual

I wrote about I used to love diary writing as a child and how I now read through my previous diary to reflect how far I have come.

I further wrote about why I love diary writing, how it gave me an unexpected opportunity to write an article in my primary magazine

I concluded by saying that even though it’s a dying habit, I will try to never grow out of it.

Is this answer fine, or do I need to add any additional details.

Thanks for your help!