<p>Since it's only 200 words, I took a straightforward approach, but I don't know if it's too general. I really like Rice, but haven't been able to visit, and I know they value interest quite a bit, so I'd like that to come through. Thanks!</p>
<p>I'd like to read it. You can PM it to me if you don't want to make it too public, but otherwise I don't know why you wouldn't have already. I thought 200 words were too few for what I wanted to say, so mine was pretty straightforward too, but that's probably what they want (I would think).</p>
<p>I'll read it for you...</p>
<p>I got in ED and had a pretty good essay, PM me and I'll let you know what I think.</p>
<p>I would strongly suggest you get an English teacher to look over it for grammar, though.</p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
<p>If, you are still needing some feedback, I'll have a read of it.</p>
<p>I got in ED, so PM me if you want more ppl to look at it.</p>
<p>I can read it too if you want.</p>
<p>I'll read it. I got in ED as well.</p>
<p>And I'm good with grammar. ;)</p>
<p>ill read too</p>