Will someone please read my Common App essay?

<p>Hey guys, I wrote my C.A. essay about two months ago, but I'm having a lot of trouble with my word limits. I'm at 919 words, and although the word limit is only a suggestion, I'd really like to get it down to about 500. If anyone is interested in reading my essay, I'd really appreciate it. I think the opinion from a total stranger would be incredibly helpful! Let me know please!</p>

<p>this is what i do for a living. if you want to send it to me, go ahead.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind reading it :)</p>