Will someone read my essay? I need it to be perfect

College Essays
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<p>So i just finished my re-write of my essay. I could really use some critiques and corrections.</p>

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<p>mm np pm me</p>

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<p>PM it over. let’s see how u’ve done it.</p>

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<p>PM it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll read.PM me.</p>

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<p>I sent a PM to some of you guys who replied.</p>

<p>I still need more people to reply. Please. It’s about my struggle with Crohn’s Disease.</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbump</p>

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<p>pm me if you want
and help me look at my essay too, ok?</p>