<p>Hey, so I'm about to submit my essays and I just realized that my Common App essay might be very plain sounding and/or boring. I don't think its a terrible essay, but I am a little worried that it isn't as amazing as some of the other essays that I have read/critiqued. When I compare it to my supplements for UChicago, I become even more worried that the essay may not be what I should be aiming for. </p>
<p>My SAT scores aren't as competitive, and I want to make sure my essay will make me memorable and give me a chance at the colleges I'm applying to.</p>
<p>Is anyone willing to give it a read and possibly offer feedback/critiques? </p>