Would anyone be willing to give me feedback on my Common App Essays?

College Essays
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<p>I don't really need corrections, just feedback/advice. I would really appreciate it, thanks in advance!</p>

2

<p>I will, just DM me :)</p>

3

<p>sure, PM me</p>

4

<p>I can!</p>

5

<p>Sure</p>

6

<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

7

<p>I’m getting some mixed opinions so I’d really appreciate any more feedback. I’d be happy to read yours as well!</p>

8

<p>I’d be happy to swap :), just send me a PM</p>