Would anyone be willing to look over my Common App essay?

As stated in the title, I’m looking for people to read over my Common App essay (Prompt #1). My parents are somewhat ambivalent about my topic, but I’d really like some outside opinions about my essay. Thanks so much!

Yup…I’ll take a look. PM :slight_smile:

I will - PM me!

I will! PM me!

Sure, I can take a look.