Would anyone like to critique my common app essay? I'll do the same for you.

College Essays
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<p>PM me if you're willing to help me out! I'd really like to get feedback from as many people as possible.</p>

2

<p>I’m up for it!</p>

3

<p>pm me too I would like to read it!</p>

4

<p>Sure thing! Shoot it my way</p>

5

<p>Sure thing! PM it to me! Can you look at mine as well?</p>

6

<p>ill read :)</p>

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<p>Ill read if you read mine!</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours, and anyone else’s who sees this and will read mine.</p>

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<p>Thanks, you guys! I’ve just PMed you :)</p>