Would anyone like to read my Princeton essay & give me advice on how to cut it down?

College Essays
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<p>It's pretty unconventional... a pretty weird topic. Can any APPROVED essay readers or Princeton alum give me some advice on how to cut it down (It's ~750 words ATM) and what to change?</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

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<p>Err… Anyone?</p>

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<p>Hey I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Not one of those APPROVED essay readers as u defined, but i can still give you feedbacks if u want. Just pm me.</p>

<p>Sent from my GT-P1000 using CC</p>

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<p>What’s an approved essay reader?</p>