Would someone be willing to read, judge, and critique my Common App Essay?

[PromotionMan]

<p>Nobody who is currently applying to colleges preferably</p>

[shellbear]

<p>Hi, you can run it by me.</p>

[Oddorable]

<p>Yep! If you still want me to read it.</p>

[thekoolkid]

<p>sure, would love too help, PM me</p>