Would someone like to read my transfer essay and give feedback? It would be very helpful.

I have had a complicated history of going to multiple colleges and failing out, I am now improving my grades at cc and am trying to apply to new four year schools. Can someone read my essay and let me know if I am explaining the situation in a good way?

Before you send it to us, would you mind installing Grammarly to ensure that your sentence construction and spelling is correct?

sure, should I pm it to you?

sure, should I pm it to you after?

@Pearsos: Since you have fewer than 15 posts, you cannot initiate a PM, but you can send your essay via return PM.

I will PM you and, if you want me to offer a brief critique of your writing, I will do so.

If you still need someone to look over your essay, I’d love to!