Would someone read my Northwestern Supplemental Essay?

I’m not sure if I’m supposed to post this in this forum or in the “College Essays” forum, but anyway, would someone mind taking a look at the rough draft of my NU essay and make any comments? I can PM you the essay if you would like to read through it.

Thanks so much!

I’ll read it. Current NU student, so I kind of know what they’re looking for.

gladly. PM me