Would you like to read my "why our school" essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,
PM me if you like to read and critique my "why our school" essay. It's about 220 words long.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read. I’m harsh though =].</p>

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<p>sureeeeeeee :)</p>

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<p>what school?</p>

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<p>Carnegie Mellon</p>

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<p>OK I’ll read it too then! (I wanted to make sure it wasn’t somewhere I’m applying to so I can be impartial) :)</p>

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<p>sure ill read/give feedback</p>