Thanks to ski for removing the essay. Here is a thread with people on CC that have been vetted to review essays: Consolidated List of Essay Readers on CC - #1229 by dianawallis Use an experienced parent and not a student/peer.
I agree with the others that all of these schools are reaches, and for internationals with a high level of need, no US college is a safety. Do you have an affordable safety in your country? EU?
Thoughts @myos1634 ?