150 Short Answer for Common App (EC)

<p>Hi there. Would anyone like to read and evaluate my 150 word short-answer for common app? It's about fencing! =O
I don't (DO NOT) care if you're 09 or w/e. Any and all comments are appreciated.
Feel free to throw harsh criticism. I'm a rock. Try me :P</p>

<p>I'm done; be glad to help.</p>

<p>Sent! Thanks.</p>

<p>I'll be glad to help.</p>

<p>send it to me.</p>

<p>I'll read it for you..</p>

<p>i'd like to read :]</p>

<p>I'll read it as well.</p>

<p>Sent =) thanks for help</p>

<p>I'll read and try to help</p>

<p>hey, make thsoe changes i told u, and then send it to me again.
thnx!</p>

<p>Send it over!!</p>

<p>Thanks for the help! :)</p>

<p>i'll read it too, if you want!</p>

<p>pm me too!</p>

<p>Sent! I think (stupid 2 minute wait :()
Tell me if I missed you!
Thanks guys!</p>

<p>pm me! I'm glad to help!</p>

<p>I'd like to read it</p>

<p>I'll comment</p>

<p>PM it to me</p>

<p>Sent!! thanks for the help, guys!</p>