150 Word EC essay help?!

College Essays
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<p>Does someone wanna help me out by reading my essay?</p>

<p>I got it down to 150 words, but I don't know if I get my point across as effectively as I would like.</p>

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<p>I'll help you out...
PM me! :)</p>

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<p>thanks xzibit!</p>

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<p>I'll help you, if you help me! I've got the same problem, so we can share EC responses.</p>

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<p>ill help. pm me</p>

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<p>ill help, pm me =]</p>

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<p>I'll critique it for you if you want.</p>

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<p>Sure thing. pm me</p>

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<p>No problem! PM it!</p>

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<p>PM me. The more the merrier. :)</p>

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<p>i'm making changes to mine really quick.</p>

<p>i'll PM it to people after i do that</p>

<p>thanks again guys!!</p>

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<p>I'll help out!</p>