Help with the 150-word EC 'essay' ?

<p>I have written two. I don't know if I'll even use either of them, but I shall see. Any one care to read and help out?</p>

<p>Keep in mind, I am not the best of writers =P</p>

<p>I’ll help out and read them. Is the essay necessary for all your applications, or is it just specific to one school? (I’m guessing it’s the one on the Common App.)</p>

<p>PM me! I’ll help!</p>