30 hours and 650 words later on the common app

Hello! Would anyone be kind enough to spend 5 minutes look over my essays?

While detailed criticism is certainly welcomed, I would be perfectly happy with a cursory 2 minute viewing. I just want to know if:

  1. It was good/funny/indicative of my personality
  2. It easily relates back to the prompt
  3. It had any glaring grammatical errors

I would be more than willing to edit your essays as well!

i’ll take a look

I’ve sent you a pm. Thanks for responding! :smiley:

Can you look at mine too please I’d like to get some feedback. I’ll PM you.

I’ve just submitted my common app (finally!) if you need more eyes

I’d be happy to take a look at yours. Would you look at mine as well? PM me :slight_smile:

I just submitted the last of my apps (AH YAAAY!) so I can take a look! I know how nerve-wracking it is so I’ll try to give you the best feedback I can
This goes for anyone else who wants someone to take a look :slight_smile: