Save a soul and read my common app essays :D?

College Essays
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<p>Is there any kind being out there who could give me some feedback on my common app essays (yes, plural, although I won't be picky and if you would only like to read one, I'll take what I can get :)? I would LOVE to send off some applications tonight (haven't sent any yet), I really need to concentrate on my supplemental essays but the self-doubt isn't getting me anywhere.
I'm not afraid of nit-pickyness and harsh criticism! I welcome it!</p>

<p>The essays:
Personal Statement: about cultural identity, 400-500 words
Extracurricular Essay: about badminton, under 200 words
Add. Info Paras: I attempt to address some discrepancies with my application about ECs and grades</p>

<p>I will not mention where I'm applying to for security reasons and would prefer to PM!</p>

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<p>I’ll read them all! Pm them to me!</p>

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<p>PM me or email me at yaujar69 at gmail if you like an adult’s opinion. I can’t promise I get back to you right away. But I will reply no later than Sunday evening.</p>

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<p>Thank you guys, I really appreciate it! Messages sent!</p>

<p>And <em>wink wink</em>, I welcome other perspectives to my essays and I’m willing to trade~</p>