5 am and I need people to critique and edit my UChicago essays! :)

<p>Alright, so it's 5 AM and I'd like it if I could get some people to go over my Why Chicago, Favorites, and Getting (not) Caught essays. I think my Why Chicago is okay, and I like my Favorites essay. My Caught essay is ehhh. It's a bit short (page and a half I think), and possibly a bit boring? I had the most wild, fantastic idea but it didn't relate to what I wanted to major in at Chicago (I wonder if it matters), and I think my other essays kind of showed the kind of person I am already. I mean, I'm not what you would say creative, but I have a different thought wave that's for sure. Plus, at 5 AM I'm pretty sure there's errors thoughout my essays (I refused to sleep without at least having a rough draft done since I already procrastinated so long!). Okay, I'm rambling at this point; I don't know what I'm saying or what I want to say.</p>

<p>Long story short: please be nice and help me out? :) I'm not quite sure on how to PM on this site (I'm still rather new), but if you give me your email I can upload the 3 essays. Please please and thank youuu! <3</p>

<p>If anything, I will scrap my Caught essay and start all over. I'm the kind of person that likes to get things just right the first time, and if it's not I won't be happy with it. I think I wrote 6 different drafts/versions of favorites, 4 for Why Chicago, and two for Caught haha. Anyways I'll stop now and post this darn message already!</p>

<p>u can message me, just go to my profile, u will see the link</p>

<p>I can read it
PM me</p>

<p>Thanks so much for everyone so far. :slight_smile: Lots of good criticism. Anyone else? I still have 11 hours and 24 minutes until the deadline!</p>