<p>Thanks for looking at this. I just wonder if I include two stories in my essay, the latter being the sequel of the former, and I can somehow link them together to form a cohesive synthesis, would it be distracting and over the limit? Because I'm sure the piece can not be under 800 words with two stories stuffed into it. </p>
<p>Also, would anyone be generous to read and give some feedback on my essay when I finish it?</p>