A UCB student seeking some Cardinal Help =]

<p>I originally wanted to transfer to the Farm but ended up not applying because I would have gotten rejected (hence the username). In any case, Stanford remains my dream grad school and I have mad respect for all of you guys. With that said, I was wondering if any of you would like to give me some feedback on some fiction pieces I wrote (I’m trying to put a decent sample together for my application into the Creative Writing classes at Cal). I’d appreciate any help I can get from you guys, especially if any of you are minoring in the CW program there. Since I’d like to know who is critiquing my work and I’ve always wanted to meet some Stanford geniuses (I can live my dreams vicariously through you! haha), I’d strongly prefer constructive criticism from people comfortable enough to be facebook friends with me =] </p>

<p>Here is my facebook link: <a href="http://berkeley.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1239819%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://berkeley.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1239819&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>Just message me if you’re down =)</p>

<p>Cheers. Peace and love from a Golden Bear.</p>

<p>What's wrong with Berkeley's graduate school?</p>

<p>Uh... more like what's your major?</p>

<p>"What's wrong with Berkeley's graduate school?"</p>

<p>Nothing's wrong with Berkeley graduate school. I'll prolly end up applying there as well. I just want a change and that's all (I believe they refer to going to grad school where you got your undergrad as intellectual incest)</p>

<p>"Uh... more like what's your major?"</p>

<p>Either English or IFS. Not sure yet.</p>

<p>Any takers?</p>

<p>I was wondering if you were in engineering.</p>

<p>Let's hope you get in.</p>

<p>"I was wondering if you were in engineering.</p>

<p>Let's hope you get in."</p>

<p>Haha, thanks ManUtd20Ole =] I hope so as well...</p>