Adult opinions on both my common app and supplement for ivies before Early deadlines?

College Essays
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<p>My common app is about physics and how it changed the way I view the world. Some people stated that they loved it while others hated it. Let me know if you can give it a read and give me an adult perspective on the essay.</p>

<p>My supplement is about hockey and I thought it came out pretty creatively. It short (250 words). I havent gotten any feedback on this essay so some adult opinions on a pastime would be really helpful. Thanks again.</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>Drop me a PM with the essays.</p>

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<p>thanks dixie anyone else up to it?</p>