advice needed on appeal letter!!!

College Essays
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<p>Hi, </p>

<p>Im from Mexico, this semester I applied to the UT, and was rejected. I'm sending an appeal letter to them, so they reconsider my admission. I thought they would accept me to the engineering school because of my EC's but I have one theory that they didn't revised my whole application.</p>

<p>I've already written my letter and correct it over and over, I just think there is something wrong with my grammar and the clearness of my letter. Can someone give their opinion on the letter considering if its logical, respectful, professional, and persuasive? </p>

<p>Thankss!!!!</p>

<p>gpa : 2.7
toefl: 98</p>

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<p>I forgto that to tell that I applied as an Internation Transfer student to UT Austin. Don't laugh at my grammar its just that there are terms i dont know how to use them!!. </p>

<p>PM if you want me to send yo the essay or add me to the msn: joel<em>g</em><a href="mailto:g@hotmail.com">g@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>thannks</p>

<p>Joey</p>

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<p>If it's not too late you can PM it to me.</p>