<p>Hello! </p>
<p>I got fascinated with a lot of people willing to help others with reviewing essays! May I ask someone to take a quick glance on my common app essay? I have chosen to write about my expulsion from high school in a very evocative manner and received some negative responses from other CC users, most of which does make sense. Although, I am in the process of re-writing it and would greatly appreciate if someone could take a look on the first or the second version!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>