AEM Transfer Essay - Please critique!

<p>Hey, can any current Cornell students or transfers into AEM please critique my supplement essay? Thanks a lot.</p>

<p>i can take a look if you want :)</p>

<p>right here man</p>

<p>Do NOT give it to Jasonbourne. He is NOT a Cornellian or a transfer. He is a future applicant.</p>

<p>PM me, if you want me to take a look</p>

<p>Sure! Pm me!</p>

<p>If you still need more people to read it, I can take a look at it. </p>

<p>Sent from my iPhone 4 using CC app</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to read it. Good luck!</p>

<p>PM me, i might have a minute!</p>

<p>-Cornell’12 Human Bio, Health, and Society</p>