<p>=( need to submit this before thanksgiving rolls around and i've only have a rough draft of both parts. my counselor does a free revision with a turn around of 2 days so i can get it back before thanksgiving, but i'm wondering if it would just be better to let multiple people read it and than revise and submit it?</p>
<p>Multiple people to read it and then revise imo</p>
<p>All I have is:</p>
<p>“From an interesting metaphorical perspective, Determination can be seen as a metaphysical compound found hidden inside a person, that in which enables them to achieve his or her objective goal(s). Surely, determination can be broken down into small subunits or single elements that essentially makeup this compound such as triggering reasons and effective methods, but ultimately in the end it all coincides and creates this realistic, powerful action that any individual with true diligent effort, possessing a goal or dream can exert, Determination.”</p>
<p>if ur tag got accepted, just ******** ur personal statement lol.</p>
<p>who cares about grammar? haha</p>
<p>=P if beside sc i would like to get into irvine to. Im okay with davis or san diego. since they a bit far fetch.</p>