<p>Amherst is my top choice school, and its basically hopeless for me to get in. I'm solid (2200 SATs top 10% etc) but not spectacular. So essentially the essay is really important. Would anyone be willing to read it for me and give any suggestions at all?</p>
<p>i will read and feedback</p>
<p>PM your essay to me if you want an adult college parent's critique.</p>