Another essay worrier

<p>Hi,
I've written my Why Swat essay for ED, and I've realized that it's pretty untraditional. Is there anyone out there (preferably a parent or someone already in Swarthmore) who would possibly be willing to read my essay and give some feedback? No offense to other high school kids, it's just that I've had a few of my friends read it and the feedback all sounds a lot like how I think, so I'd like a "different" POV.
Thanks a ton.</p>

<p>I'm a parent of a sophomore at Swat. Sure, pm it to me...I'll try.</p>

<p>I'm a parent of a Swat first-year student. I'll read it too if you pm it to me.</p>