any college students/ parents want to help me with my supplement essay?

<p>It's around 850 words, and I'm concerned about the length, style, and content, and whether it even says enough about me, or not. I'll hopefully be sending the same essay to Uchicago as well. I'm VERY concerned about it, and I honestly don't know if it's good or bad. Can someone please help me out with it?</p>

<p>No current seniors/High school students, please. I'm very paranoid, and it's nothing personal, sorry.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it. I’m the mom of a Harvard freshman.</p>

<p>PM sent! :)</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>