Any political people willing to read my Chapel Hill Supplement?

For my UNC Chapel Hill Supplement essay I chose to answer the prompt “There are 27 amendments to the Constitution of the US. What should be the 28th?” I’ll just say that I answered in a kind of unique way, so I need someone somewhat familiar will the political process and constitutional amendments to read and critique. Some knowledge of history may also be helpful. Thanks!!

I’ll read it - pm me.