Can you read this supplement that I wrote in 25 minutes?

College Essays
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<p>I came up with this and wrote it pretty quickly, so I'd love it if I could get another set of eyes to review it (not just for grammar and structure, but for the ideas themselves).</p>

<p>It's in response to the UNC Chapel-Hill supplement.</p>

<p>I won't be sending it to new members. I'd prefer if my reviewer is a parent or high school graduate! Thank you!!</p>

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<p>Are you in some kind of a rush to submit this?</p>

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<p>Oh hey, I remember reading one of your essays this summer! :)</p>

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<p>@ribbonroad224 Haha it’s due Oct. 15, but I have 4 other apps due Nov. 1 that i haven’t started on. So i made myself a pretty strict calendar of when I’m doing which app. My goal is to finish this one this weekend!</p>

<p>And i remember that too, thank you so much for your help!</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. i’m not applying to your school so should be fine</p>